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03/18/11
Oh wow! I love this! You really captured her emotions well.

I noticed one misplaced comma, but it certainly didn't detract from the piece as a whole.

Again, very good, and a very sweet piece, considering it deals with such a sad subject. Great job!
03/19/11
I hope this receives wide coverage for it will minister to thousands. It truly gets to the heart of it all. Most of us have done something for which we are deeply ashamed. Thank God for His willingness to forgive and bring us to an eternity of hope!
03/20/11
Your writing revealed the innermost struggle with pain in the MC's life.
Nothing better than learning real truth from a current perspective.
Heaven will be filled with mothers and children meeting for the first time...isn't our God wonderful?
You did a fantastic job with such a difficult topic. I wish this could be in every waiting room where abortions are done. Great job
Congratulations for placing 8th in your level and 12th overall!