The Official Writing Challenge
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03/21/11
Well, this is certainly creative. I confess, I feel like I'm missing some key component because I'm not seeing the prompt or the "point" and I've read it three times now. I apologize if I'm just too thick to see it. Still, your descriptive details were wonderful. Unique, which is definitely a good thing.
03/22/11
This seems to be filled with symbolism and is definitely intriguing! I'd love to read the author's explanation.
This is definitely interesting and really made me think. I must confess I don't know what A vampire turtle is, but I think there are quite a few people who have unplugged themselves from the world.
03/23/11
I love the quote at the beginning! And I must admit, your title is perfect. This is definitely "out there." :)
03/26/11
Another thought-provoking story, with much to think about. Methinks the MC yearns to unplug himself from the Eternal, or perhaps just sleep it away. Or maybe there's some other hidden meaning. I too have an idea that there's much more to this than meets the eye. Very intriguing.