The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful work on this poem. I had to look up "petroglyphed". For others who wonder, it is a picture carved in rock. Great descriptions in this lovely poem.
Impressive imagery...I like the cactus theme carried through to the end, via the shallow roots and tapping into the deep water of Christ...lots to meditate on here.
Soothing and refreshing ... loved your metaphor of the cactus. To soak up Christ's truth in a dry world is truly wonderful.
You painted a pretty and vivid picture in my mind
Congratulations! This is a beautiful poem with such creative and vivid descriptions.
Congratulations on your first place and EC wins.
Wow! This is a beautiful meditation. [being an AZ resident... every aspect here is familiar]. Congrats on your Editor's Choice AND level ribbon!
Congratulations on your brevity and your breadth - and on your first placing.
Excellent work.
[I mention brevity, because writing about a cactus could have trapped you with too many 'points' to cover. :-)]
Absolutely beautiful! Congraulations on your well-deserved EC.
What a beautiful poem. I really liked the imagery throughout. Congratulations on your well deserved EC award.
Your talent for word crafting is superbly apparent in this award winning poem--congratulations on both wins!