The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
Beautiful work on this poem. I had to look up "petroglyphed". For others who wonder, it is a picture carved in rock. Great descriptions in this lovely poem.
03/17/11
Impressive imagery...I like the cactus theme carried through to the end, via the shallow roots and tapping into the deep water of Christ...lots to meditate on here.
03/23/11
Soothing and refreshing ... loved your metaphor of the cactus. To soak up Christ's truth in a dry world is truly wonderful.
03/23/11
You painted a pretty and vivid picture in my mind
03/24/11
Congratulations! This is a beautiful poem with such creative and vivid descriptions.
03/24/11
Congratulations on your first place and EC wins.
03/24/11
Congratulations!!!
03/24/11
Wow! This is a beautiful meditation. [being an AZ resident... every aspect here is familiar]. Congrats on your Editor's Choice AND level ribbon!
03/24/11
Congratulations on your brevity and your breadth - and on your first placing.
Excellent work.
[I mention brevity, because writing about a cactus could have trapped you with too many 'points' to cover. :-)]
03/26/11
Absolutely beautiful! Congraulations on your well-deserved EC.
03/30/11
What a beautiful poem. I really liked the imagery throughout. Congratulations on your well deserved EC award.
04/01/11
Your talent for word crafting is superbly apparent in this award winning poem--congratulations on both wins!