The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/11
I like this. I love the contrast you painted between "forever" and "eternal."
03/18/11
What a beautiful thought. I especially liked the last line.
Eternity sounds so much better than forever. I had always thought of them as being the same but you certainly pointed out the difference in a lovely way.
03/19/11
Very unique idea here. Gave me something to think about. Enjoyed this very much.
03/21/11
Very nice. But eternity, ah eternity... I loved that.
03/24/11
Sounds great to me. Well done