The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/11
Very graphic portrayal, though a couple of small typos did interrupt the flow near the beginning. Overall, excellent.
03/22/11
I could almost smell the sulfur seeping from this story. Your descriptions put me in this scene. What a powerful story!
Very thought provoking I've often wondered if Satan came to Jesus and truly repented if he too would be forgiven. Almost everyone says Satan would never seek forgiveness. Your story touched on that question and I'm so glad you wrote this piece for it is by hearing and listening to others along with prayer that I figure out these questions. This was well-done.
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level and 24th overall!