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03/10/11
I can so relate to that panic the feeling of being alone, than the calmness when I remember I'm never alone. Great story.
03/12/11
I know how that feels to be lost in a strange place. A few minutes seems like hours.
03/15/11
Oh, I can identify with this one! Several times, even recently, I've uttered that same 'panic' prayer whilst driving! Thanks for sharing - great writing.
03/15/11
Well thought out and descriptive. I could picture every scene. It read like a testimonial and I really, really liked the way you turned to prayer for guidance and peace. We need more examples like that today.
03/15/11
Great descriptions and pacing. Good work.
03/15/11
It is very anxiety provoking to be left alone in a new area, especially a mountainous one. I am glad you stopped for a moment to pray and clear your head.

Very well written story.
03/16/11
Ooooo....I hate that feeling of panic when minutes seem like an eternity and fear presses in!! Nicely told story, very engaging, and especially gripping since it is true. :-)