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I can so relate to that panic the feeling of being alone, than the calmness when I remember I'm never alone. Great story.
03/12/11
I know how that feels to be lost in a strange place. A few minutes seems like hours.
03/15/11
Oh, I can identify with this one! Several times, even recently, I've uttered that same 'panic' prayer whilst driving! Thanks for sharing - great writing.
Well thought out and descriptive. I could picture every scene. It read like a testimonial and I really, really liked the way you turned to prayer for guidance and peace. We need more examples like that today.
03/15/11
Great descriptions and pacing. Good work.
03/15/11
It is very anxiety provoking to be left alone in a new area, especially a mountainous one. I am glad you stopped for a moment to pray and clear your head.

Very well written story.
Ooooo....I hate that feeling of panic when minutes seem like an eternity and fear presses in!! Nicely told story, very engaging, and especially gripping since it is true. :-)