The Official Writing Challenge
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Bravo. I'm not comparing this to any other entry I have read, but this really touched me and I thought it was very well done, and I hope it does very well because it is just one of those pieces that can stand by itself. Great job.
03/10/11
Pure poetry. Just the right amount of sweetness.
03/11/11
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I loved this.
What a way to tell a story! Wonderful!
03/12/11
Excellent job of mixing prose within the story. The mother and daughter's relationship was wonderfully portrayed.

This is definitely one of my top favorites for the week.
I really, really liked this. Not only the style but the content and meaning behind it. Well done.
03/14/11
Wonderfully written! I enjoyed how the poem was different throughout the life stages of the characters. I really thought it was neat that the daughter ended up having a boy...just made me wonder if his walls would be plastered with sports heroes!
03/15/11
Wonderful! The format and message are so masterfully entwined.
Very sweet, and a legacy every mother would be proud to share. ;-)

03/16/11
This could be a children's book. Puts me in mind of Robert Munsch's "Love You Forever." Beautiful and well-done.
This is wonderful. It needs to be published. Well done!
This is beautiful. Instead of reading it I heard a beautiful comforting lullaby or song inmy mind. I think with some tweaking you could turn this into an awesome song.
03/19/11
I too immediately thought of "love You Forever" ...one of my favorites.