The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 681 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Way to go. Great job. Loved this. Super opening and loved the way to opened the story to me. Can't wait to see who wrote this. Impressive.
03/10/11
Very well done! I don't think I have ever read any stories written about this particular passage of scripture so I really enjoyed this creative and thought provoking piece. Thank you.
What a marvelous creative version of the Bible story--Descriptions so vivid and with a profound message.
03/14/11
Very creative and profound. Wonderful explanation of the difference between important and trivial matters.

I hope this piece gets some kind of recognition this week.
03/15/11
This really reaches the heart, and the soul. What a lesson, what a reminder. Excellently written.
03/15/11
So excellent. Your descriptions were just perfect and the story... amazing. Well done.
Loved the way this was framed with a grabber of an opening and closing. An effective re-telling of a Biblical story that could launch further discussion. Lovely descriptions and character development.
Loved the way this was framed with a grabber of an opening and closing. An effective re-telling of a Biblical story that could launch further discussion. Lovely descriptions and character development.
03/16/11
Awesome! The dialogue, descriptions, everything. Very well done, enjoyable, to the point!