The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
(clapping my hands) Vivid descriptions made this a fun read. Love the closing line. Priceless!
A delightful MC and story line. Well done.
03/15/11
I really loved reading this story. The MCs seemed so alive and vibrant. So many fun descriptions, such as, Toyota resembled a porquipine and "Or there'd be a hole in the roof and we'd have to untangle your dreadlocks from the tools.
Congratulations on placing 22 overall!