The Official Writing Challenge
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Tiny suggestion...the thought processes and vocabulary are probably way too mature for those of a ten year old undistinguishable from the mother...
03/12/11
Poor kid!
I liked the scenerio of him being dragged from place to place...just like a 10 yr. old would hate.
It's amazing how much longer a minute can be in a child's world. You did a nice job showing me the details. My hands even feel sticky.
03/14/11
At the end I must admit 'ice-cream'ed with laughter! A great little story that did not dessert the topic. Lots of fun in your word pictures too, especially in how you've described the dog.