The Official Writing Challenge
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One of the first comments I received with my first story at Faithwriters was that there must be plenty of white space. I have been ever grateful since....
03/12/11
Smile! Great thoughts!
It helps the reader if you break the paragraphs with an extra line in between. (I made the same mistake at first, too.)
The repeated phrase grew stronger each time. Well done!
You picked a controversial topic to write about and that takes quite a but of courage.

In the beginning I had a hard time figuring out where Spurgeon's quote ended. Make sure you close the quotes and start a new paragraph.

I liked the points you made and the Wait a Minute emphasized your points.