The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
HAW HAW! Enjoyable read. Tiny suggestion...I almost got so bogged down in descriptions especially in third paragraph I was tempted to stop reading. Thankfully my curiosity was piqued.
03/12/11
Oh! I should have seen that one coming!
I love the repeated line.
Well done!
03/13/11
This is positively divine. I've heard it said that writer's should avoid cliche's but the you caught my eye line chuckling for quite some time! This is wonderful!
03/15/11
This was very cute and good for a laugh. I will agree with the previous comment: sometimes less is more and simpler is better. Can't believe I didn't see the last line coming. Thanks for the chuckle!
03/17/11
An interesting read out of the usual. Nicely written and catching your readers' attention.
03/17/11
This was so enticing all the way through and the ending was hilarious. Reminded me of your pigeon towed character. Congratulations on being highly commended. Well deserved.