The Official Writing Challenge
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HAW HAW! Enjoyable read. Tiny suggestion...I almost got so bogged down in descriptions especially in third paragraph I was tempted to stop reading. Thankfully my curiosity was piqued.
03/12/11
Oh! I should have seen that one coming!
I love the repeated line.
Well done!
This is positively divine. I've heard it said that writer's should avoid cliche's but the you caught my eye line chuckling for quite some time! This is wonderful!
This was very cute and good for a laugh. I will agree with the previous comment: sometimes less is more and simpler is better. Can't believe I didn't see the last line coming. Thanks for the chuckle!
03/17/11
An interesting read out of the usual. Nicely written and catching your readers' attention.
03/17/11
This was so enticing all the way through and the ending was hilarious. Reminded me of your pigeon towed character. Congratulations on being highly commended. Well deserved.