The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/11
Oh wow! I was a little confused (not sure if he made time go backwards or not), but I love the POV.
I especially loved the thought of the angel waiting for the Word of God before acting.
03/12/11
Nicely done! Very interesting story. All in God's timing. Thank you.
I really enjoyed this. It reminded me of my mom she always believed in Guardian Angels she called her's G. A. This was well-written, very suspenseful_
03/13/11
Very evocative descriptions of what is really beyond words, though I was a little confused in the middle. Still, the insurance claimcould also prove to be interesting reading...
03/14/11
Great spell-binding story. I loved the line: The Holiness of God covered him like the rays of the sun on naked flesh.

I had a little trouble figuring out what the counting sword was all about. It sounded like an instant replay in sports. I think you wanted to use the word sped, instead of speed.

It was a very enjoyable read.
03/17/11
Hey Mick,
Well done on your placing old son! Terrific stuff - and well done judge!