The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. I enjoyed your take on the Rapture. Tip: Don't forget to capitalize "Mom" and "Grandpa" next time.
03/10/11
I loved the twists and turns of your story and the way you used an ordinary occurence many of us can relate to, like getting wisdom teeth pulled, to emphasis how we don't the hour or the minute He will return. It reminds us to live in expectancy. Great job!
Nicely done with a great reminder to make sure those we love know our Savior.
This is a great story, I could relate toyour MC 'feel her pain and her joy.
03/13/11
I enjoy how you have interwoven the MC's immediate discomfort and sense of anxiety with the ultimate healing that Heaven will usher in. And you not sacrificed the sense of nomality within this process. I like the sense of discovery that the ending promises...
03/17/11
Congratulations on placing 7th Sherrie! Good job!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!