The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative with the theme. How true it is. We need to spend time with God because time is so short. Jesus is at the door.
03/12/11
Very Creative!
I like how you built it up and brought about a happy ending to it.
I like how you used different phases, ordinary moments of their life to demonstrate we may never know when Jesus will return.