The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/11
Great devotional poem. My favorite paragraph (stanza, is that what is't called?) is the second to last.
03/06/11
Your progression through the poem was excellent, nice pacing through the stages. Well done.
03/09/11
This poem reminds me of what a friend told me about knowing what's more important—family or career. When we are sick, who are the ones who care for us and worry about us? Are they our loved ones or the people who pay us for our work or service?

You have captured the essence of what’s really important in life very well. Thanks for sharing this.


03/09/11
Excellent job. I liked the soft words into the stanzas.
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level and the top 30 overall!