The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/11
This is definitely creative!

The rhyming names were cute, but a bit confusing.

Cute ending.
03/08/11
Cute story. The similar sounding names had me rereading some parts. Thank you.
03/15/11
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level and the top 30 overall!
03/15/11
This was hysterical. It would make a great children's picture book entertaining for both adult and kid!.