The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/11
This is definitely creative!

The rhyming names were cute, but a bit confusing.

Cute ending.
03/08/11
Cute story. The similar sounding names had me rereading some parts. Thank you.
Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level and the top 30 overall!
This was hysterical. It would make a great children's picture book entertaining for both adult and kid!.