The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/11
This is very creative... A modern day take on Goldilocks!

The ending confused me a bit... I think I got it, but it took me a couple of reads.

Good job with this one.
03/08/11
I like the accent and names in this. Thank you.
03/09/11
Cute take on Goldilocks and the three bears.