The Official Writing Challenge
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I could see you storming inside the school. :-) I also liked your comparison of his eyes to dinner plates. LOL God bless you.
Great job. This was a well-told, realistic story. I would have done the same thing. Nothing lights a mommy's fire like seeing her little one injured needlessly.
02/02/05
It is absolutely true about Mama Bears! Even though my cub is 20, if someone tried to hurt him, I'd still be the first out the door to 'protect' the very capable-of-protecting- himself 6'4" MAN . It is just one of those built in things. Nicely written. Good imagery.