The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
I found this to be a very tender and compassionate story. Thank you for giving the mother such a loving son. You painted some pretty images with your words.
03/07/11
I found your story to be very compassionate and loving. I found your writing to be very eloquent.

I liked several lines, especially, "Your mind finds the truth, your heart uncovers it."
03/09/11
Excellent on so many levels! Well done!
03/09/11
"Budding Lavender and summer roses tickle the underbelly of the air." Ah now, I wish I could think of phrases like that. This is beautiful on a number of levels. Most of all, I liked the changed heart of the mc's wife. Excellent writing.

03/10/11
Liked it. Even though my mind started to wander, It came back with the description of things that surrounded the setting.