The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
I found this to be a very tender and compassionate story. Thank you for giving the mother such a loving son. You painted some pretty images with your words.
03/07/11
I found your story to be very compassionate and loving. I found your writing to be very eloquent.

I liked several lines, especially, "Your mind finds the truth, your heart uncovers it."
03/09/11
Excellent on so many levels! Well done!
"Budding Lavender and summer roses tickle the underbelly of the air." Ah now, I wish I could think of phrases like that. This is beautiful on a number of levels. Most of all, I liked the changed heart of the mc's wife. Excellent writing.

Liked it. Even though my mind started to wander, It came back with the description of things that surrounded the setting.