The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/11
There are some very good reminders here!

I would have started with "Mother Theressa's schedule puts my own to shame," or something like that, rather than starting with your own pondering about the topic. It makes for a better "hook." Also, one small typo... I hope you don't have more than one husband. ;)

This is definitely an "ouch" piece, but in a good way. Good job!
03/06/11
I like your positive challenge, rather than a contrived guilt, and your own wuillingness to question yourself without forcing others to agree with your stance.
03/09/11
Watching tv got too expensive for me. I thought I would really miss it, but to be honest I don't.

The problem is I'm still not totally in balance. My prayer life and Bible study are sometimes on the bottom of my list, instead of the top.