The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this. Such a wonderful example of two hearts before the Lord, one God-centered; one self-centered. Very well done and a wake-up call for those that will hear it! Congrats!
03/06/11
I love the irony you have drawn so well in two sincere folks as they pour out their hearts to God. Well, one of them is benefiting from the experience. but I like the challenge in these contrasts, and couldn't help but think of the Pahrisee and the publican in Jesus' parable. Very well done.
03/09/11
This reminds me of the analogy of the glass being half full or half empty. I want to say I act like Sadie all the time, but I can't.

Great writing.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3!