The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this. Such a wonderful example of two hearts before the Lord, one God-centered; one self-centered. Very well done and a wake-up call for those that will hear it! Congrats!
I love the irony you have drawn so well in two sincere folks as they pour out their hearts to God. Well, one of them is benefiting from the experience. but I like the challenge in these contrasts, and couldn't help but think of the Pahrisee and the publican in Jesus' parable. Very well done.
This reminds me of the analogy of the glass being half full or half empty. I want to say I act like Sadie all the time, but I can't.

Great writing.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3!