The Official Writing Challenge
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I think I know who wrote this. :-) I'm curious - did you purposely make the poem one sentence? It has a neat affect; it goes well with the constant flowing of time. Great poem - I like the pictures you presented here.
03/03/11
This short piece packs a nice punch. Very worthy read and great use of words throughout.
I love the imagagery in your poem.
03/06/11
The flow created by the single sentence is very intriguing, and your expressive style is excellent. Well done.
03/06/11
I like the descriptive words and the meter of the poem. Time is always shifting and changing.

03/08/11
I like the lift in your perspective, which builds throughout your first verse...