The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/11
I liked this!

This didn't seem to follow sequentially. It goes from him dying and unable to speak, to him discussing things with his wife, to the first treatment options, back to his death. Putting some divider between the sections, or putting it in italics to indicate it was Keith's thinking (if it was) would have made things clearer.

I'm glad Keith made his decision in his final moments.
03/08/11
I like this. You never know who will benefit from a pamphlet. Thank you.