The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
Great imagery! I particularly like the lyrical sound of the last four lines. Don't know if the reference to "relish" and taste was coincidental, but it triggered a thought.

Nicely done
03/04/11
Nicely done and reminds your readers that time is a precious gift that we should use wisely and appreciate. Thanks for this spot on topic poem.
I really like the analogy of the tiger in this well written poem.
03/05/11
I really liked the flavor of your poem, especially the well planned descriptive words.