The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/11
I like how you gave this sad day in history a personal account. Your writing is strong and believable.
02/25/11
You brought this piece of tragic history to life with your excellent writing. Your title drew me in--perfect piece for the topic.
02/28/11
POWERFUL!
02/28/11
This story drew my interest from start to finish. The journal entries from an actual historical event were moving.

Well done.
03/02/11
Gut wrenching!
03/04/11
Congratulations on ranking 9th in Masters and in the top 20 overall!