The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/11
Cute, lovely story. I enjoyed the turn of phrase. And I loved the ending, where you brought me right up to the moment, but left me right there, with a smile on my face.
03/02/11
Clever and fun. Enjoyed this.
03/04/11
Congrats on the Highly Commended. :) Had I not already known it was your piece, I would have recognized your signature in the paragraph describing Becky's family history! Nice writing.