The Official Writing Challenge
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That ending is perfect. Great job!
02/24/11
I like this. Good job!
Wow. Very nice job again. It reads extremely well out loud. I liked the feel of it. The words were easy to speak and made nice sounds in shades of purple. Another great poem. Very well done.
02/25/11
This lovely picture poem was truly an enjoyable read. I'm clapping for you.
02/25/11
I liked the image you created in your poem. I can just imagine sipping tea and sharing memories of days gone by.
02/25/11
I wanted to be there for that moment too (and I was)! Your word choices are so perfect.
02/28/11
This is beautiful and so wonderfully descriptive.
What a privilege it is to share times like this, when 'dusty boxes are unpacked from the attic of a dear one's days'. Just lovely.

03/03/11
Congratulations on your well deserved EC award.
03/04/11
Congratulations, Jim, for placing with your wonderful words!