The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/11
The Son who outshines the sun. Nicely done.
02/25/11
Good title for this heavenly piece. Lots of poetic phrases throughout this entry which I easily give my two thumbs up. Enjoyable read.
02/25/11
This poem creates a warm feeling in my heart. Great descriptive words and rhythm.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in Masters and in the too 20 overall!
03/05/11
I think one of the favorite lines for me, was your allusion to Isaiah 53, with "carries our grief, and bears our burden." This is beautiful!