The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Heart wrenching!
Excellent writing. Such a painful experience.
You write as though you'd been there; your story rang true to life. I felt the anguish and torment of the prisoner. One regret: I wish it could have been longer so we could have a greater sense of hope for the prisoner and his ultimate release. Good writing.
02/23/11
Gripping tale filled with torment, pain and angst. Held my interest from start to end.
Congratulations for placing 14th in Masters!