The Official Writing Challenge
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Gave me chill bumps. Great entensity, art and skill. You hammered your message and the topic. You could read that anywhere to a standing O. Bravo.
AMAZING! I love this - the cadence and variation in stanzas as well as content. I found myself holding my breath (literally). A grabber-of-an-entry!! Great job with the topic, and with creative flair. ;-)
02/21/11
Oh, my! You got my blood pumping! Such power and emotion come through your poetry.
This is beautiful and though it is a poetic way to tell the story of David and Goliath, it tells a message that is so relevant in today's world. It is so important to wear the proper amour. Well-done.
02/22/11
Your format really worked well here. The title was perfect for this poem and how you told it from the different perspectives. Extremely well done.
02/23/11
Well written take on the David and Goliath challenge.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
02/24/11
Loved the masterful use of words and format! Absolutely stunning!
02/24/11
I thought I'd commented on this story earlier this week, but apparently not. Excellent, and congratulations on your EC!
02/24/11
Excellent! Congratulations on your EC!
I knew this was goning to be a top-tenner right away. Awesome job. Very inspiring, (and copied for further study). Well done and glad to see it on the EC list.
Loved the way this helps the heart/mind see the spiritual armor we must daily put on. It is things like this imagery that makes getting battle prepared much more real. Congratulations, Margaret.