The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 422 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/21/11
Oh, I really like this. You kept me in suspense until I read the words, 'He called us'. Fabulous take on what the scene must have been like from the eye of the tiny one. (I loved how you described the smells, exactly how I imagine it would have been).
02/21/11
Very enjoyable profile of life in the ark, but I think we all need to know why you didn't get those two flies when you had the chance?????
You might like to check my entry of some time back called "Ahead of His Time."
I love the idea of Noah's ark from the POV of one of the Animals. I wasn't sure which one was the MC at first, but a spider was a splendid choice!
02/21/11
Great take on a well-known Biblical event. It was smart of you not to reveal who the "mc" was until the end...it kept me curious and intrigued all the way through. Well done.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 3 and 30th overall!
03/02/11
Lisa, I'm going to feature this story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 28. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!