The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/11
This is just brilliant - I am still giggling. As one who has tried 'marching up diet hill' (then sliding back down the other side) several times, I can so identify - maybe not with the last verse! Wonderful!!
02/22/11
Clever and fun - and I love the rhyming title. Too fun!
02/23/11
This is such a clever and well-written poem. Keep up the good work. I was doing well until I secumbed to the taste of chocolate.
This was fun. I loved your voice and some of the clever phrasings. Congratulations on your EC!
Sorry, Beth, it wasn't an EC; my mistake. I did love it though.
Congratulations for placing 15th in masters!