The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Beautifully done. Perfect for the topic.
02/18/11
I want to know more! Does she get everything she hoped for? Great story!
02/18/11
Really enjoyed the descriptions and how they took me right into the scene. Also like how she hung on to her hope for the future. Nicely done.
02/18/11
I was captivated from the first sentence. You did a good job of capturing your mc's hope for her future.
02/18/11
My heart is racing with anticipation right along with Mikri's. Great job making the reader feel your MC's emtotions. First-rate!
02/19/11
What are we without hope; a great job. The last line was classic.
02/20/11
Fantastic writing. I love the voice of your MC and her story was one of hope through adversity...a story of universal appeal. Great job!
02/20/11

Well done, a wonderful story of hope.
02/21/11
This is just wonderful - a brilliant story with such a realistic feel, because surely these were the feeling as the 50 year wait drew to a close. Your characters are portrayed so well. This theme is one I've often been tempted to write of, but I couldn't do it like this! Excellent.
02/21/11
What an awesome idea! I love this story. Well done!