The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/11
You did an amazing job of capturing the atmosphere in this piece. I was right there. Captivating!
02/23/11
I felt like I was in the audience watching this play unfold. Much was said without actually writing the words. Great job.
02/23/11
Good descriptive writing, but it made me slightly teary eyed.
02/24/11
Excellent, and so sad. Congratulations on your very well deserved placing.
02/24/11
Powerful descriptions. Congratulations on your placing!
Very well done, Loren. You are such a smooth and well trained writer. You lead our emotions around like an experienced horse trainer. Glad to see your EC.
Loren, you just keep getting better and better. This is a magnificent story. Congratulations on placing way up hight! I'm proud of you.