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Very moving. I've read stories from this pov before, but would never have guessed where you were going. You touched my heart. I am sure this story will encourage any who need to read it. Job well done.
Wow, what a range of emotions you took me on. The ending is sad because as a parent I can relate to how horrible it would be to lose any child and especially a full-term baby. But its comforting to know that Jesus was right there with both mother and Child.
02/21/11
Very well written. I loved the commentary from baby's perspective, (but must admit I felt very sad at the end). Great work.
02/21/11
This was so sad and happy at the same time. I never guessed what the ending would be. Kept my attention all the way through.
02/21/11
Very effective and powerful POV! A sobering ending, sad but hopeful.
02/21/11
Whoa...not the "happy-ever-after" ending I was expecting. And yet, it was a happy-ever-after for the baby. Goodness. This was gripping.
02/23/11
I love how you have captured the innocence and wonder in this story. It took me a while to realise just where the inside information was coming from, but you gently built the suspense and the joy along with the sadness.