The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved it, loved it loved it! I'll bet we all can see a bit of ourselves in this one. Great job!
Took me almost all the way through before I finally understood where you were going with this. Very clever.
I chuckled almost all the way through this one. If that isn't all of us! Great job! Couldn't have said it better myself! Loved it!
My goodness. How is it possible you've only received but three comments so far? This is fabulous. So clever and beautifully spoken. I loved it.
Wonderful descriptive writing! Most enjoyable read.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3!
Another very engaging entry from you. I definitely think this should've placed high--ironic, given your subject matter. :) Though 12th at Level 3 would be quite high for me! I found some parts of this story easier to penetrate than others, bit that didn't make me like them any the less. Your puzzling prose is consistently great fun to try & decipher.