The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Loved it, loved it loved it! I'll bet we all can see a bit of ourselves in this one. Great job!
02/22/11
Took me almost all the way through before I finally understood where you were going with this. Very clever.
02/23/11
I chuckled almost all the way through this one. If that isn't all of us! Great job! Couldn't have said it better myself! Loved it!
02/23/11
My goodness. How is it possible you've only received but three comments so far? This is fabulous. So clever and beautifully spoken. I loved it.
02/23/11
Wonderful descriptive writing! Most enjoyable read.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3!
02/24/11
Another very engaging entry from you. I definitely think this should've placed high--ironic, given your subject matter. :) Though 12th at Level 3 would be quite high for me! I found some parts of this story easier to penetrate than others, bit that didn't make me like them any the less. Your puzzling prose is consistently great fun to try & decipher.