The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/11
Oh this story pulls at my heart. I want to wrap my arms around Desmond and reassure him. Fantastic writing!
02/15/11
So sad. I feel for Desmond. Great title.
02/15/11
Extended dialog is a challenge for any writer. You wrote capably.

Writing in present tense, I find to be also difficult to pull off. You did.
02/17/11
Wow. I loved this story. Great job. It was so, so smooth, but deep. I enjoyed it. Congrats on EC. Well deserved
02/18/11
Have only just read this - it's amazing! It broke my heart though with its sadness and the realisation that this is how it often is. Really well written and well deserving of being placed.