The Official Writing Challenge
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A very touching poetic commentary. And I agree with the message, Becuase He says. Love the poem too, it moved me. Thank you.
02/12/11
This is a beautiful, thought provoking poem. I like the way you used contrasts and repetitions.
02/15/11
Very fitting
02/16/11
Excellent!
This gave me chills you said so much in few words. Outstanding writing-may we never forget_
02/16/11
Not often you find such penetrating social commentary placed within the context of well-crafted verse.
02/16/11
Passionate, inspired writing. Well done!
02/17/11
Congratulations on your well deserved placing. I just love this title and the wonderful words at the end - Because He Says
02/17/11
Wow. This one ripped at my heart. So few words, so powerfully said. Congratulations on your win.
Loved the MCís story, the repetition. This poem is a blessing to us all. Beautiful
02/17/11
Moving story told in poetic form. Justice will never totally prevail in this world.

Congratulations on your second place award. Well deserved.
02/17/11
Congratulations on your EC!
02/17/11
Incredible message written beautifully. Congrats on your well-deserved recognition.
Congrats again. I'm glad I commented on it before. I liked it from the start. Superb work.
02/20/11
Strong message communicated through an impressive economy of words. Congratulations, Melanie!