The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/11
You draw quite a word picture of all the places and events - I can see it in my mind. It's like taking a train ride through history and fits perfectly with the topic.

This piece seems to set the stage for a longer story.

The only thing I could have wished for was a little more dialogue. And yet that may not be what your particular audience is looking for.


02/15/11
Very nice descriptions. Country living used to be untouched by current issues in the rest of the U.S. but not so now. I still like the quiet, though.