The Official Writing Challenge
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A gritty and beautiful, although not pretty, story of redemption. A couple of stand-out descriptive phrases for me are "a colorful line on that old scarred wooden bench" and "a spider web of scars on her wrists". Comes across as authentic. If this is a true story, may God bless the MC & keep her. Whether true or fiction, may God use it to reach someone in this situation. Good writing. Ęĺ

(Only red ink, and this is most likely just one of my own pet peeves, the phrase "found herself" has become a bit tired.)
02/11/11
So sad, but so beautiful. A wonderful testimony to the far reaching grace of God.
Congratulations for placing 20th overall!