The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/11
What an awful scene to watch, especially understanding who He was. But the little girl got it right. :)
You did an outstanding job. Although I know the story well, it was like reading it for the first time. I can't imagine what it would be like to be a little girl and be apart of that horrific scene. But you showed her seeing what Jesus is all about-love. Beautiful job!
02/15/11
This was a great retelling of a painful but necessary event. I could feel the fear of the mother in the crowd and the love between Jesus and the little girl.
02/16/11
The chaotic feel of the story was excellent. The ending felt a bit rushed, but loved your characters.
02/16/11
Beautiful, just beautiful.