The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
Would have been more interesting to have a dialogue with MC's husband. Also, paragraphs need to be shortened for easier reading.
02/12/11
My heart hurts for Tina. It can be easy to let herself become complacent in life, not happy, but not sad either. Well-done I hope all the Tinas of the world find the strength to fight for happiness.