The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story with a little mystery mixed in. Made we wonder if your MC found the mochila.
What an interesting story. I liked learning more about the pony express and Uncle Billy seemed quite a character. I could easily picture this as an opening to a TV show or a movie!
02/15/11
this was so interesting and original :-) I really enjoyed it
i hope we will have the next episode!