The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
I can't wait until Christ's return!

Man keeps thinking he rules the world and is making it better, but we who believe in the Bible see the truth.

Well written and thoughtful poem.
02/12/11
Such accurate descriptions of this present time... increased knowledge while foolishness and fears rule the day. I love the beauty and hope of the last two stanzas. Well written poem...
Brilliant! We must be ready! thanks. God bless.
I appreciated your poem of warning and of inspiration--the last verse my favorite.
One of the signs of His return is increase in knowledge. You put it into poetry. It's the first article I've read that gets a 100%.
02/15/11
Excellent almost glorious display of skill as to rhyme and meter.

Tightly rimed but still with feel of free verse.
Congratulations for placing 15th in Masters and 18th overall!