The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
Well written poem. I really liked the line about our life becoming a stained glass window between bars.
a sad commentary on our times, couched in beautiful phrases
02/15/11
The inner rhythm in your writing is quite good. The flow from delight to concern was deftly accomplished.

Great read.
Congratulations for placing 13th in Masters and 16th overall!