The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Nice little diddi with good rhythm and rhyme. I assume it is true, in which case even more meaningful.
02/03/11
Beautiful. The meter is perfect. Nicely done.
What a sweet romantic poem. I'm so glad he made it home. As tensions erupt in Egypt, its easy to forget the solders in Iraq and Afghanistan. Thank you for reminding me to pray for the military everywhere.
02/03/11
No, not a true happening to me. But I write letters to soldiers through SoldiersAngels.org, and this kind of thing happens all the time. Thanks for the comments.
This is a really lovely poem. Is it your true story?
02/05/11
Aw...lovely, sweet poem,easy to read and jogs along nicely. (sorry, I'm not a poet)but you know what I mean.
02/05/11
Very sweet poem. I'm so glad it's a happy ending, knowing that many aren't. Good job!
02/05/11
Touching and well presented. God bless.
02/06/11
cleverly done a sweet innocent poem on a heart rending and serious situation.
02/09/11
I do ....... hope it works out happily in the end, as there's so much innocent hope and trust here.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level three and 28th overall!