The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some wonderful observations, descriptions and sentiments being expressed here. It needs some tightening up however - it was a little awkward in its flow in places which made it a little heavier going than it needed to be. Alot in this to like however. Keep writing and God bless.
This is just the kind of emotional situation that sometimes evokes a poetic response. Thank you for sharing this.