The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/11
Wow... this is excellent.. You draw emotions from your reader. I became so involved with Gary's pain over his loneliness, that your ending was so very welcome. My mind kept racing ahead, trying to figure out how it would end... and you still surprised me.
02/07/11
This really touched my heart - a wonderfully written story. I agree with Beth - I had no idea how it would end! You portrayed the sadness, the despair, the answer to prayer, and future hope -all so well. Thankyou.
On topic and a captivating read. Well done.
02/10/11
Excellent! Congrats on your EC!
02/10/11
Congratulations Michael. I am so glad this wonderful story was placed.
02/10/11
A lovely story. It touched my heart and I enjoyed reading it.
Smiling from ear to ear after reading this. I believe God has in hands in many relationships; and you've shown one way He goes about it right here. Congratulations on this uplifting, hopeful entry. Loren
02/10/11
The story was perfect for the title. Strong emotions portrayed here. Well done. Congratulations on your EC.
06/02/11
A captivating read filled with emotion. So well written!