The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
02/04/11
This entry is this week's randomly chosen winner for our new little prize--a free ratings feedback report. The author will be contacted today via the Private Messenger service with more information.

Congratulations. :-)

Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
02/06/11
This is filled with emotion. You skillfully take your reader from case to case, and then revisit them at a later appropriate hour. There was so much packed into the 24 hour time period. It's amazing what the law enforcement officers are able to do. Your open-ended ending was quite realistic (but sad.)
02/08/11
Wow. Busy 24 hours. Felt like praying for Allison. Thank you.
02/10/11
Fast-paced and emotional. Well done! Congrats on your EC!
So many things...how does one keep their sanity? Really liked this and the authenticity of the way it was presented. Congratulations on your EC.
Loren
02/10/11
Congratulations on your EC. This was loaded with action, intrigue, drama, mystery. I'm exhausted (but in a good way). Well done.